Aww this poem started out sweet, but ended sad! I still enjoyed it. I loved the first stanza, and I love how it was "the dawn of a sweet relationship" and "love bloomed" .. great choice of words! |
by Kips2.0
Thank you for your comment. I'm still recuperating from the hurt. I'll get over it, but it will take some time. |
by Xanthe
The transition of tones went so smoothly. From a sweet love story to a bitter ending of a relationship. Nice.. |