And when my mind rusts
And my heart wilts
And my thoughts stray
And my ashes are washed away
My dreams shall crawl out of me
And one day shall prevail
Oh my dreams shall prevail

love it. all this hope and beams of light in the end..... lke a phoenix, you'll rise from the ground, or even comes as a million, one more time.

Very inspirational. I wonder how it sounds when sung.. great job.

I love this poem, I think it's unique and has a strong message. I love the title "Revolutionary Blues" it definitely caught my eye. The poem itself felt like it could be turned into a bluesy song (maybe you should try turning it into a song!). Amazing poem!!