I like this piece, it asks very good questions. However the answers to those questions will very for every single person ever to have lived as well as those who will live. I like the emotion usage. I think the word choice could be stronger, but all in all excellent job.

This piece really provokes a lot of thought. I have felt like that many times, where I said to myself, when is the pain going to go away, and when is the happiness going to come back, and you just stop and think, will it ever?

Great job, 5/5

This poem is great =]