I was like why did he put this on the sad section? This is one sweet and loving poem, that actually until I got to the last verse.
You take the reader to such a warm and happy places, but then BOOM !! Everything goes different with the last verse. I have to say I like the twist at the end.

Great job once again :)

I REALLY loved your poem
i give u 5/5
cause whats written in this poem happened to me <3
its like u was writing my story
great job <3

Matt, my buddy <3

You've done it once again, my friend, you blew me away with just your twist in what seemed to be a beautiful poem. I shouldn't be surprised because you write so well and always seem to swept me off my feet leaving me speechless. (:

5/5

-Heather