Nominating :)

I love this.

[Sometimes,
I wish I was your-]

No.
Stop it.

-Wanting to wish for something, then stopping yourself knowing that it will never happen. Knowing it will only hurt you if you say i wish i was...

This poem is full of such emotion. Just wanting to be back with him, but being hurt surprising you everytime; even though you should be used it. I can relate to this poem
Flawless :)

5/5

Cayce-
I saw this first on the nominated page and I have to say I agree with it being nominated. You made this your own piece- the idea of being filled with doubt from being with him in the past yet having that desire you can't not grasp in the end.
The ending was so cryptic- you are not able to be his everything because you are not there, and in some ways I thought of more than distance separating you, it's just time and emotion acting as barriers. A really original write, you took so many words and made them have their moment and give that breaking emotion. I seriously enjoyed reading every line,, I liked the way you used punctuation too to not just make an emphasis but show the hesitation and the sad impossibilty of having him in that perfect moment.

Thanks for sharing!
MaryAnne

I can relate to your words so much in so many ways but I learnt that we can love without being loved back.It is hard but sometimes thats the way it is. Great job Cayce.

This poem is so unique and powerful! It really made me start thinking about "love" and wishful thinking! I loved it! Good work my friend! Keep it up!

I like this piece a lot and I agree with that which has already been said. It is a very well written piece. I love the amount of emotion and descriptions in it. Excellent piece 5/5 for sure

I felt like I was watching a tv show in a channel were there is a theater. A woman talking to her subconscious and showing her confusion. Just trying to find an answer.

I enjoyed this piece. I liked how you made an emphasis on certain words as well as the words on which you decided to make that emphasis. You made your poem unique by writing along the expressions suh as [shh..] and the way you accommodated your words.