I think you put a lot of emotion in this poem, and it's always nice to write down your sadness, because then it's not stuck in your head, it's free to leave anytime you want it to. There were quite a bit of typos/errors in this poem and I'll point them out to you.

Do he deserve all this ?
^
Do should be does. :]

She blames her self for not listening to her mind
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Herself is one word. :]

Her heart beat so fast
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Beat should be beats. :]

She screams by his name
^
If I were you I would change by to out. I think it'd make more sense. :]

why you left ?
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Same here. I think it'd make more sense if you said "Why did you leave?"

Her mind start talking
^
Start should be starts.

She cries and ask herself
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Ask should be asks. :]

Why he fooled me again ?
Why that happened again ?
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First like should be: "Why did he fool me again?" and the second line should be: "Why did that happen again?"

Her heart finally told her to stop wasting her time
^
I really really like this line. It's my favorite one in the whole poem. I think it'd make a bigger impact though if it was the very last line in the whole poem.

Nice job!

Cayce

I wish Her Heart were the best teacher, she had ever needed, maybe, today, would have been extinct.. Now, lessons, you've learned to stay stronger. We can always cheer up, @ least, for the Life. Rather than her heart, I'ld gladly suggest, her Ink, bleeds with such heart-felt words, on paper, unto victory!!! Thanks for sharing.

:) thanks <3
her heart wont stop bleeding <\3

Beautiful <3

Its a sad love poem.... when i used to start writing some years ago. i used to write these kind of poems. i can see myself in your poetry... becoz in the beginning i was like u...

my favorite lines are

Her heart finally told her to stop wasting her time </3

But She's still suffering

My gosh this piece is wonderful. There is so much emotion and the word choice is great. All in all, it is a wonderful piece. Excellent job

What a beautiful written poem. Wonderful in the wording and emotional power that it has on the reader, not going to lie I teared up. I could relate from past times, greatly done. Bravo. 5/5

Awww thanks ;) <3