OMG! omg AmaZING :D their is so much to beseen heard and said about this magnificient poem
Bobby u connect so well and greatly with whatever u choose to write as I always love them and more and more each time :) I loved it and loved it all and always I enjoy reading ur excellent works :)
My most favorite part--

Will I exploded and then cease
Or will I survive with flair
Do I keep on trying
Throughout the despair?

I also liked this ones well--

The yearnings are unfulfilled
The goodbyes and let downs
Especially when I can't see
what are the honest, justifiable grounds.

But wow I loved it all amazing job :) 20/20

I really like it. Very beautiful and meaningful!!