This was a lot of fun and came together so easily. I know I said no love poems but you made it a breeze. Thank you girl for this Collab

This was filled with enthusiasm and magic. To have that kind of love can make the difference in someone's entire existance. The icing on the cake:)

Well done, you two:)

5/5 Ingrid

Wow! This poem is beautiful.... I was mystified! The title was lovely and caught my eye... and the pictures you painted in this poem was amazing, I envisioned the imagery and it was fantastic. I didn't even realize it was a collaboration until the end, and this is a realllly GREAT collaboration. It flowed really well and I couldn't tell at all. I really love the metaphors you've written... like this part:

"I savor the nectar of your kiss
yearning for more, absorbing your warmth
A kaleidoscopic of colors twirl round me
as fairy dust glistens on my skin."

"Our hearts shall dance in the milky way
and the galaxies in space."

All I can say is BEAUTIFUL!!! Well done you two!!! =D

I love what the two of you have done, it's tender and delicate, mixed with galactic wonder. Beautiful

Realy a beautiful poem..one of ur best..ful points..

What a beautiful, lovely, romantic poem that you have both written here.

Each stanza shows so much love and the use of the words here are wonderful.

I love how you used the words "Fairy Dust" as if it were Innocent Fairy herself!

I felt a sense of warmth when reading this poem. It's like a poem about first love and the feelings you get when you fall in love for the first time.

With open arms I embrace you .
Smiling as my heart takes wings.
I savor the nectar of your kiss
yearning for more, absorbing your warmth
A kaleidoscopic of colors twirl round me
as fairy dust glistens on my skin.
Sweet eternity is my wish with you.
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I love this stanza - my fav one of the poem. I love the words kaleidoscopic colours - mirrored love!

x

Well done to the both of you!