by Cinnamonspice Dec 1, 2011
category :
Friendship, family /
love, friendship
From my window a tree |
The descriptivness of this poem was great...I could really visualize the scene...good job! |
Tara Kay at 2011-11-30 |
Jad at 2011-11-30 |
Wow, Connie this poem is so beautiful! It a sweet poem that is like a breath of fresh air. I loved it from start to beginning. I really like how you compared friendship to nature in this way.. it was so lovely to read! The beginning and ending were all perfect and the poem flowed really well. |
by NightFlyer
I really feel the preciousness of friendship now that I'm seperate from my best friend by many miles. So your analogy in your poem of a tree glowing with the rays of the sunrise is perfect. You paint a beautiful image here. |