Comments : Freedom

  • 12 years ago

    by Bobby

    One thing about experience is that we make mistakes to learn them at times, we have to listen to those God places in our lives for many times they have walked the path we are now on.

    I really like the line "You resent me for me"
    we can only be me for if we are not we are now the lie

  • 12 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    Great rhyme, flows and scheme..it well-written,
    I agreed with Bobby..we can learn from our mistakes and that we can decide which direction we shall path...everyone of us have freedom and it depends upon you how to live that freedom...
    anyways,..your poem is very interesting, I enjoyed it..well-written5/5