by TiredOfWaiting Dec 2, 2011
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Mr Pencil love Miss Paper, so he use himself to write a love letter to her.When he want give it to Miss Paper, he found that Paper was in love with Pen, so he ask Miss Eraser to help him erase all the words. |
by Mello193
Wow. well this didn't really seem like a poem to me. the flow was off and it didn't rhyme, it was really imaginative and unique, and has potential to be a poem with some real character. over all i feel like the first half was truly inspired but the latter half was to bleak. |