Come what may

Very well written I would agree with the fact that far too many people allow their past to cripple their future. Life should always be lived from day to day. Great Job!

Great poem. i really like how it ended. i really dont know what else to say other than your writing impresses me. whatever thats worth to you. great job. keep up the excellent work

I love your work, i get lost reading it, its not just how you write it, it's what you are writing, you are an amazing and talented writer, you can tell that your not just gifted, but you actually feel each and every emotion in your poems, true poets. :).
take care
xxkimxx

Why worry, when nothing
can be done?
^
I really loved this part. While I was reading, it was like this part just hit me, like it was talking just to me.

I love the message and free-spiritedness in this poem. Great job!

Cayce

I like it very much, and it embodies a pretty good philosophy, in fact not letting the past affect me is something that i need to get better at. So yeah, the message is good.

Sometimes it almost seemed like you had to choose between rhyming and flow, but honestly I'm not the best at either of those, maybe a little bit of tweaking but honestly thats just being nitpicky, over all i liked it quite a lot.

It got the intended message across, succinctly, and without breaking the reader's focus. well done