by Free Bird Jun 24, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Forever in my dreams you will be, |
great poem, i think that you should take it another step forward... if you want that is... tell about how he died exactly... and put all of your emotions into it and use lots of description so the reader feels what your feeling and sees what your seeing |
great poem, i think that you should take it another step forward... if you want that is... tell about how he died exactly... and put all of your emotions into it and use lots of description so the reader feels what your feeling and sees what your seeing |
That was a very heartfelt poem. You have a lot of talent. |