Comments : Wish I Could See

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    This poem really does show what awesome qualities and traits people can posess.

    I love the words you used "A heart that beats not covered with ice" - a well written way to describe someone obviously with a cold heart (I don't think that's you by the way)

    I read this and can see parts of these traits are mine and others are also what I wish for.

    I haven't known you for long but I know that you do not carry all the negative traits that you have expressed in your poem at all.

    It is really difficult sometimes because other people see what we can't and we can see what they can't as well.

    Like I know when people say oh you've got a nice smile I'm like @#$@# off lol I don't believe them but they may believe it.

    It's what we think of when we look at ourselves in the mirror or any kind of reflection. We don't believe we have good traits and that makes us more depressed. Or at least it makes me more depressed.

    Either way - you do have awesome traits too :D

    A well written poem

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