I really do love this poem full of dark emotions. I can feel every word as I am reading each line.

I love the rhyming of this poem. I think it's flawless and everything fits into place.

I love that this poem tells a little story about what you go through each day - what you suffer from and how other people react. How they call you names like "crazy" etc.

I have to say the first four lines and last four are so powerful. The last two being my favourite. Trying to live in a black and white world and looking for the gray.

Things aren't always simple as black and white in life and I think you have portrayed this very well in the poem.

A well write hun

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I have to agre here with Lioness, parts of the poem are so affective....dark, but stirring. Especially the first 2 and the last 2 lines:

The world is black and white
There is a heaven and a hell

Living in this world of black and white
While searching for the gray.

We all have to find that elusive happy medium in between, the one in which we can live in with some comfort. Emotions, dark, but well wrung.

I feel the same way!!! you explained this so well