This is realy good..i love the imagery you put into this and how u made depression come to life..the content was good and the wording and the connection of sentences was amazing..to top it all off, u had a magnificent ending that truly fits with this great piece..5/5

Dang, this piece is... wow. The emotion and descriptions used are immaculate. It seems a little long, but other wise I was intrigued and enjoyed the piece so much. You have done an excellent job penning a piece of perfection. I hope to see more from you soon.

Interesting... Not very creative but nice all the same. Great choice of words! It was a bit long.. If i actually had to rate it i would say 3/5.

Knock knock...Someonethere ?
Vry good Writtings...nd hey u'll get off ur problems nd dipressions,dn't wrry !
4r ur poetry,its 4/5 frm me.