This was very powerful. It also made me feel a little sad too. |
This was a very powerful poem, indeed. Very ambiguous, too. I get the impression of your "shadow" being an old friend or old lover maybe? Quite unsure of if that's exactly what you were going for, but that's the message it sends me. I loved the last stanza. Great job. |
by Chelsey
This was so deep and honest I loved it!! I love the comparison of a friend to the shadow, really nice. Your wording was great and I absolutely loved this title! I found it so creative in relevance to the shadow! Awesome! |
by Chelsey
This was so deep and honest I loved it!! I love the comparison of a friend to the shadow, really nice. Your wording was great and I absolutely loved this title! I found it so creative in relevance to the shadow! Awesome! |
by Whatever works
Wow |
by Jess
Wow, The Title Caught My Attention. For One. |
I love the shadow metaphor and the free flow of this well written revealing poem |
by Chelsey
Wow! This was so intense! I loved your choice of words , they truly set the tone of this poem. One can't read this and not take it seriously. I liked your line "I wish you could detach your presence from me". Sometimes people don't have to physically be around you to have their presence there, even when we don't want it there. That feeling sucks :/ |
by Paul Gondwe
I really loved your choice of words in this piece. It was filled with great emotions and was heartfelt. 5 |
by Steven Croat
Great poem with nice ideas... |
by Xanthe
The first stanza really stood out for me, very powerful. I love your metaphors for the shadow. Well-penned! |
Your presence exudes the clouds of reminiscence of my friends, |
by TSI25
I really like this one a lot. the shadow, to me at least, represents a kind of duality which can be found in all people, so its instantly relatable. you prod at the skeletons in all our closets without actually making a direct accusation. its subtle and yet powerful, which i like a lot. very well written, probably my favorite one by you yet. |
by Marvellous
Silence whispers, that we may think. What repels, is not meant to be. |
An amazing piece that immediately touches the heart, emulating any expert poet poems. It's really full of emotions. I loved it. |
What a powerfull emotional poem which i enjoyed reading |
A very powerful piece Amreen! |
Wow! The incorporation of shadow to the subject of the poem is very lovely. Beautifully described and the imagery is strong, vividly created. Its somewhat sad to always have a feeling of pessimism looming around one. Engulfing one in sheer abject despair. We get cuddled in worries of the unknown, uncertain what will shadow us further, to achieve that peace of mind. |
by Rusheena
This is amazing! It's refreshing and soothing, despite its dark tone. Keep it up! |