by Exostosis
Connie, I see you have attempted the poem already, much appreciated =) |
by Sylvia
Connie this is really good and you met the challenge and as far as I am concerned won it. It does take the reader into the world of an ant and as I said could be applied to people and society today. Good job. |
by Decayed
Connie, lol at me :p |
by Jenni
I think that the title fits really well and I have to admit that I bow to you for being able to write such a poem. I think that writing nature poems is quite tough, at least to me it is, but then even writing it from the perspective of an ant. Dear Connie your imagination is vivid and I believe that you're good at watching things, which is shown in this poem. I am not an ant expert, but what I can tell from my own experiences is that this definately describes ants and their life very well. |
I never thought I would enjoy a poem about ants but this is exceptional. Not only is it informative but it gives a look into their world.The single sentence at the end of each stanza is a great emphasis of each one. Good format, good write, vivid imagination |
The title was well choosen fitted so well ... the description was perfect the flow and words were amazing have to admit this is one of my favs from you well penned x |
by Chelsey
Wow! I don't think I've ever thought Id see the day where I found a poem about ants to be so intriguing! THis was awesome! Your title was great!! And I love the tone in this poem. Reminded me of line of soldiers, or in the case a line of ants chanting some kind of pledge lol. |
by Liliana
I think you did really good in your challenge, the title is a very creative way to refer yourself to ants good job :) |
by Meena Krish
An interesting poem about ants and its feelings. You did an excellent job in writing this..well done! |
by L
Interesting topic.. and poem. I like it. Its interesting how many of us aren't aware of nature and how we can compare it to us as well. |
by Lonely Rider
When I read the note the only thought that came to me was I could never have written so beautifully .... I think you wrote an amazing piece from the point of view of an ant. Very interesting read :) |
by Tara Kay
How have I missed this Connie! My Apologies. |