I loved the fact that you mentioned all five of our senses in this poem. I feel you had used the sixth one as well when you mentioned the word "think" kind of reminded me of some psychic ability.

I also liked the flow and the rhyming of this poem and of course the use of the word stink

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I loved the fact that you mentioned all five of our senses in this poem. I feel you had used the sixth one as well when you mentioned the word "think" kind of reminded me of some psychic ability.

I also liked the flow and the rhyming of this poem and of course the use of the word stink

Awesome

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