Comments : Come Get Me

  • 13 years ago

    by Lioness

    Ok at first when I read the poem (I was very silly) but thought that initially you were outside waiting for your lover, calling him to you can both have a wild night of passion outdoors. When you mentioned the word "Wet" I thought it was raining hahaha then I was like omg no not exactly lol

    If it was raining I would have called the poem "Even the rain can't put out my fire" or something along those lines.

    Since it's not... A name for the poem "Come and put out my fire" or even something more simple - Cmon - Come Get Me

    Anyways there have been many times where I could relate to this poem. Very direct!

    Well done

    x

  • 13 years ago

    by Decayed

    I like the intensive scenery here, so tense and I can here the pulsing hearts. Great way in making that seem alive :)