DAT IX D FEELIN I GET DURING XMAS

DAT IX D FEELIN I GET DURING XMAS

DAT IX D FEELIN I GET DURING XMAS

Uhmm.. I'm not sure if I understood it correctly but I think you don't like the feelings that Christmas brings to people or perhaps you might consider them fake?

Christmas is Christmas not for the gift but for the people who we celebrate it with. For instance Christmas without my grandma is not a Christmas just any other day.

But I have to give you points for this piece since you use metaphors and my suggestion is to make the poem in stanzas just to make it look more appealing.

Sori but that isnt what i meant with d poem.it simple says that some peole turn their hearts good towards othersjust bcause it is christmas but change just after d season

Sori but that isnt what i meant with d poem.it simple says that some peole turn their hearts good towards othersjust bcause it is christmas but change just after d season

Sori but that isnt what i meant with d poem.it simple says that some peole turn their hearts good towards othersjust bcause it is christmas but change just after d season

Sori but that isnt what i meant with d poem.it simple says that some peole turn their hearts good towards othersjust bcause it is christmas but change just after d season

Sori but that isnt what i meant with d poem.it simple says that some peole turn their hearts good towards othersjust bcause it is christmas but change just after d season

Sori but that isnt what i meant with d poem.it simple says that some peole turn their hearts good towards othersjust bcause it is christmas but change just after d season