Comments : I Don't Need Pity

  • 13 years ago

    by Something Diabolical

    Truley amazing!!

    i feel exactly the same, its like i could have written this myself, its scary

    an amazing heartfelt piece
    you've touched mine

    keep at it!
    5/5 from me

  • 13 years ago

    by amanda

    "All of my poems tell the story of my life."
    That is such a good line! It's an awsome poem, so true. Great job! :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Andee

    This Is Very Beautiful And Full Of Emotion. Proud Of You! :P

  • 13 years ago

    by Amreen

    Beautiful...!
    I loved your poem and you..:)
    As you said that your poetry reflects your thinking,it do relates a lot to me as my poems too showcase a phase of my life or mood and I just love the way you showed your feelings in the form of a poem...
    Good Work...:))

  • 13 years ago

    by Chelsey

    You know I truly like your view of poetry. I always thought poery should be an expression of ones feelings and they shouldnt be critiqued unless trying a new form. I liked this free verse/rant and how you spoke your mind! Very interesting piece :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Pure Prodigy

    Beautiful poem, gave me goose bumps and made tears come to my eyes, this is exactly how i feel. A toast to f*qk pity...