Comments : Solitary Shell

  • 13 years ago

    by Sylvia

    We cannot always have someone in our lives and that requires us to be happy with ourselves, if we are not, then we feel incomplete. Having someone in your life is not always what we imagine it will be.

  • 13 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    This is more than a sad poem but a poem of self imprisonment. It was very touching , well worded and the flow was very smooth.

    Connie

  • 13 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    This poem was intense! you really captured what it feels like to feel alone and depressed. I feel moved by this poem and think it is such a beautiful piece even though its very sad.

    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    *hugs*

  • 13 years ago

    by NightFlyer

    Can relate to the hopelessness and loneliness expressed in your poem. Have been feeling the same since I left Florida. You captured this emotion very well here.

  • 13 years ago

    by Exostosis

    We humans are a prisoner of our self created prison. Only we, can break through the barrier we have fabricated to shut out what we're afraid of. Too often it is depression or a notion of being lonely and too often it is self pity, where one is sure that he does not deserve all that he is bestowed upon with. But eventually, this phase passes.

    Very well written bro.

  • 13 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    When hopelessness and loneliness engulfs us we tend to imprison ourselves in that world and it is only us who can break out of it..maybe it is a test from God to see you grow..take care my friend.