"Nothing hurts you unless you are true"

cant be true without being in

The anguish I feel rolling off the words

Great write :0)

Beautifully penned, my dear. <3
5/5

Hey hun,

This is a very emotional and broken hearted poem. The words expressed are so heartfelt and true, it really brings the poem to life

Can't you see the way I feel about you?
Nothing hurts you unless you are true
with what you feel inside your beating heart,
tears instantly started releasing from my eyes,
saying no, not this again please..
just wanting everything to go back to normal.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
I felt this was the saddest part of the poem due to the fact that you had gone through this before with the same person "no not this again"

You had tried to make the relationship work, but for some reason it broke down again

When things like this happen we always question things and wonder if the way he felt was ever real and true. It makes us question everything, our future partners etc.

I love this poem. So well written babe

x

We never know what path a relationship with go. I think you penned that pretty well. We can hope and pray but in the end it's the end that counts.

Connie