Wow, Paul this poem is amazing! I realllly liked it... it was a unique and interesting topic! Anger truly is a serious emotion, and I love the way you discussed it in this poem. I completely agree with everything you've said! I really enjoyed this poem. Well done! =D |
by Kips2.0
Thanks! |
by Whatever works
I agree with this poem we all do have anger in us that needs to get out either which way i love it |
by Chelsey
Wow I love this title! I love this whole thing! And its so true! Everyone reacts to situations differently and everyones level of anger is different. Your wording was verfy intriguing in this poem, it made me think :) good job |
by Kips2.0
Thanks Chelsey...keep reading and don't stop commenting. :) |
by Jenni
I'd recommend you not to write the title in caps because it might actually scare readers rather than interest them, though it somehow underlines teh topic since some people show their anger while writing in caps, but I do not know whether that was your intention. |
by Kips2.0
Thanks I will see if there is any other way to make it poetic. However, I wrote down what came out of my heart. Thanks once again! |
by Marvellous
Kindly permit me, refer you to my poem *Until Then*, to see how unified this whole thing works. I'm amazed 2 know now, d@ d Spirit, though in different tongues, is ONE. Your poem *Fear*, n this 1, all circulate around what point I made out of mine_ n, I cannot agree less. You've blessed my day with this. Thank you. |
by Kips2.0
Welcome |
by Jess
Wow, So Very True! |
by Kips2.0
Thanks Jessi |
by Pain
The ability to control anger, |
by Xanthe
The repetition did you a favor here. |
by Kips2.0
'eyesore' is true with how you view it, but ultimately, it's the fact that when we flare up we make a mess of every other thing and sometimes hurt those people we'd rather not hurt if we had been patience. |