Ms.loner

by deejay211   Dec 8, 2011


Heart broken and
Bruce she had been
rape she barely
escape the pain
she went thru
she was lost
with nothing
else to do
her friends
teased her
her friends
pushed her
her friends
well what
friends
she was left
all alone with
no one she can
call her own
she was ms.loner

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  • 12 years ago

    by deejay211

    I just fixed it

  • 12 years ago

    by Mello193

    Well i noticed some errors. you should put some of those words in the past tense. would bring out the depth of the poem. cool idea just a little unedited for my taste. i think once you nail down how to properly place things and fix your grammar you might have some really cool reads. there still really cool just a little difficult to read.

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