Love love love this :)

You can see everything play out like its a movie. It flows so perfectly together & draws your attention in to keep reading.

Amazing Job
5/5

I like poems with short lines

cuz they are always creative and flows well

and your wordchoice made it even better .

love it 5/5

I too agree with the two above...The poem seem to be like a story and a good one...:))
choice of words is good and the short sentences keep me glued to end the poem...:)

good work..:))

Wow, I Love This.
You Wrote 2 to 4 words in each line..
and it somehow worked.:)
Perfectly:)
5/5

Well done, I am proud to have a members that talented in my club, claps for this. if by Tuesday it was nominateable still, i will vote for it. Both cases, claps..I love it!

I really liked this one sweetie. I read almost like a riddle. I love the imagery and how you worded some of the lines. Very nice read. -Nik

I think this is a cool poem. Right on yo.

Again, the title drew me in. :)

I really like the short paced lines. The rhymes made it flow really nicely... it was just like it flew off your tongue as you read it.

I like the darkness to this, gave me chills at times.

Very inspiring, well done!