Comments : Cigarette-Scented Fingers

  • 12 years ago

    by Sylvia

    It is sometimes strange the things that remind us of one we love. Your words give me an image of a woman, eyes closed, arms hugging herself, remembering those fingers that smell of cigarettes and the thoughts and emotions that they bring back. Well done.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Oh do I love your poems. Such a sensual piece dear. Very beautiful. -Nik

  • 12 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    I really loved this stanaz

    "Write my name on your heart,
    For you to know how much i care,
    In case we ever grow apart,
    With every beat, you'll know i'm there. "

    Connie

  • 12 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    This write is so passionate that it can be felt and the images come alive with each stanza..very, very nice!

  • 12 years ago

    by Em

    Beautiful! xx