Well this poem is kind of cool type i mean kind of casual but its good

I like this alot. The meanings encased in the metaphor says tons about the deffinition of what is in your own heart. Being able to write or rewrite our thoughts and feelings does help to dispell some of the anxieties and complications that come with being one whom is radiating with thought and emotion. I like how you portray thought and emotion. It is raw, it is real to reel.