Beauty of Winter (Haiku)

There is something magical about the seasons and I agree with everyone else the is a beautiful write. I have never heard anyone use trees as an ocean before. That was very interesting to me. But an ocean is very vast so what I thought of first is a vast cospe of trees in a forest of some kind. The scene you paint with just the first line is perfect. Nictating is a great word too and I had to look it up but its so great.

Nictating small ice crystals: what a beautiful write. Now I can imagine a vast forest of trees trickled with snow and ice hanging from it. The last line is great as well because it wraps up the whole poem and what you wanted to say. Snow is a beautiful and not a lot of people look at it as such. I love the title as well because it says what you want to say. Great. 5

Majestic scene indeed, and nice word chioce too. Lovely haiku :)

Great poem! i really like how you brought the trees and snow to life and dropped them in the scene creating winter in so little words. explosive ; )

Majestic scene you have written

Very well done on this haiku Jen- Haiku to me are the trickest to write but you did it..although the shortest of poems yours created a beautiful scene :) Take care
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