I love the feelings here too, the tints of sadness and the general impressions, however you need to play with the punctuation and have a different touch..especially when say he say.. try add " " or dashes, because it killed the flow and i had to repeat more than once to catch the meaning.
other than that, i love it, i love all ur work..

This one stands out more than others in this topic. It has deep symbolism, in a sad enchanting way, particularly in the last 2 stanza's:

Those footsteps
I heard before
now fade
as you disappear

You had nothing to say
not even a goodbye
I could feel what you feel

So what did I do wrong?

A well written poem reflecting a depth in feelings portrayed and the sadness.