Beautiful words hun. Next time I would take it a little easy with the diction. It's great that you have such a vast vocabulary but sometimes simplicity it best. Keep writing. -Nik

If there is one thing i lav about ur poetry is ur good knowledge of words.
This is an immaculate piece that deserves to b nominated.
More than a 5.

I disagree with the above, your wording is what makes your poems your's. Even though your vocabulary is extensive it's understandable with a smooth and easy flow. Not everyone could pull that off

I agree with the above comment( touh ..).
This Is an excellent piece. This show that you carefully choose your words and give the time that your poem deserves. Excellent job.

Excellent job much has already been said, but its awesome

Your very descriptive words to this female divinity wrapped in mythological references make this profound image you've portrayed very fascinating,making me want to read this again and again.

Yes, you have a unique panel of wording as I can see in some of your pieces. If that is you, then go ahead... But if you're convinced that SAT words are what make poems stronger, then no.. I don't think it clicks that way.

Anyhow, I found this piece strong!!!

I personally enjoy your wording, I may have to look some up to get the proper meaning but I think this is your forte. Something that is your signature. If you feel that you want to dabble with simpler words to see what response you get that's cool. But either way I love your work

There were only two lines in this poem that flowed smoothly.

"With those onyx eyes you hypnotize
but our intimacy retains arcane"

The rest was choppy and not fluid because of your excessive use of loaded vocabulary. This might be your "style" but it wasn't fun to read, in my opinion. It was just too much at once.

I like the intricacies of your rhyme scheme although I find your diction to be too much. I enjoy a lot of the words you use but I feel as though there are too many complex terms.

I don't think that you DID use an encyclopaedia and thesaurus at the same time while writing this. I wouldn't, however, be surprised if you admitted to doing so.

I don't know...it's just so wordy sometimes that it doesn't even make sense or at least the message doesn't come across very well. Also I noticed the improper use of word categories such as nouns, verbs and adjectives at times.

3/5

Cool, you had me somewhat lost, but towards the end you tied it all together.
nice, G xD

Breath taking lines~

"Aeon eclipses have elapsed, but your aroma
presists an elemental intricacy,
spawning a concept feeling"

The flow from beginning to the end is great.

Good job! 5/5!

I have not read your work in a while..this is beautiful! love everything about it! i look forward to reading more soon :) hope things have been well!

<3 B