Its as thought you have written my own thoughts. much appreciated and i can relate so much it is scary.

thanks for sharing. 5/5 and nominated.

~kuro

This poem sad in a way, speaks so well. A desire to relinquish a love not true, a wish to fly free, and a resoluteness (perhaps anger) within to be set free.

"I'm burning
my way out of your world,
I can't stand to
exist here anymore."

Fiery, determination to be liberated...powerful.

"Crushed beneath your
dreams, my own thoughts
are toxic now..."

So much said in here...in so few words.

"the fire is burning
blue making it very
clear to see the watery
depth inside of you..

the liquid ash I always knew."

The fire changed its color to a transparent blue through which I can see the watery depth in you...outstanding and original metaphorical use to say that I now finally can see the true you, "the liquid ash I always knew".....Amazing choice of words.
A very "Affective" write.

Your title pulls the reader in, your words keep them interested. Great flow, creative , sad but beautiful

Wow this is very good and amazing and paints great imagery it's amazing and wow such emotion and meaning I loved it and there's not much more I could say it was greatly written 5/5

If I only had more nominations (three doesn't seem like enough), I would be nominating this as quickly as I blink. This is beautiful poetry.

I love the rhythm in this poem, and the slight rhyme that was riddled throughout the piece. It doesn't feel intentional, so that brings even more excitement to the piece.. it's just natural talent.

"I'm burning
my way out of your world,
I can't stand to
exist here anymore."

Wow. This is the piece that caught me the most and hit me the hardest emotionally. So much pain is held here. This is such a sad plead, asking to be let go.

What a strong and powerful write.

Great great piece of art. It kind of moved me, provoked my thoughts and the depths of my poetic-self. Kudos!

/clear to see the watery
depth inside of you..

the liquid ash I always knew.
//
ohh I loved these lines so much ... very powerful.
well penned.

Each stanza has painted a strong image in my mind and it pulls me into your world of emotions..very well penned with a heavy heart..take care.

This poem was like roaring waves of emotion. 5/5

"This love, my love
was nothing more then
an obsession over
a memory--"

I loved this stanza!

mandy :)

Reading your poem after a very long time and it just made me realize what i have been missing.
Your words surely take every reader along for a journey & i really love being part of it.

Loved it.

all the best and take care

Provocative lines~

This love, my love
was nothing more then
an obsession over
a memory--

the fire is burning
blue making it very
clear to see the watery
depth inside of you..

the liquid ash I always knew.

Your a true writer! 5/6!

Cheers,
Ray