Hoping

by Truelove   Dec 10, 2011


Waiting.for.you
Hoping ull remember us our love n our laughter
Hoping ull care
Hoping you can heal this broken heart again</3
Hoping you won't lose hope
Hoping ull keep trying
Hoping ull give me a reason to live to eat to study to smile to be happy Again!!
Hoping ull stay and never give up
Hoping you won't leave me
Hoping ull stay beside me to wipe my tears n hold my hand
saying that everything will be ok
Hoping you won't kick me out of your life ..
Hoping you can do all that
Say u can
Make me happy
Hoping & hoping
Make us happy again
She only have you
Where are you now ?
stop thinking of leaving
Start thinking of fixing all this
Say ur going to fix the damages
U was the only good thing in my life
Now ur gone </3

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  • 12 years ago

    by Truelove

    Thanks :)

  • 12 years ago

    by everbloom789

    Like it I think It captures the feeling very well I know I have felt like that Xd

  • 12 years ago

    by Truelove

    Oh yeah
    Thanks .. <3

  • 12 years ago

    by Marvellous

    It's a pity, but, it's just life, just cheer up. Good job.

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    U hav here a brilliant and well written poem..my only suggestions is that u cut out some of the 'hoping', i think it will add to a already good flow, my other suggestion is that i hav noticed u hav used some slang here and there e.g 'n'..thats unique about u but mayb writing it in full will sound even better..
    I hope i am not harsh..
    Overall, another well written poem that deserves to be read.5/5

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