by Bobby
Venomous kisses left on lips, |
This was actually one of my favorites you've ever written and one of the best I think you've ever written. |
Relationships can be toxic but usually it is the fault of both parties though only no one will see that. |
by Sunshine
Excellent job, you have poured your thoughts and feelings into this semidark poem, that many people would relate to. |
by Adeele Muuli
Great poem.Seems sad but true.Fav. |
Blood curdling words, from an anguished heart on a warpath against poor guys who are just looking for love. Losing trust can be difficult, losing love is devastating, but not irrepairable. A day will come when the heartbreak syndrome will be cured by a nicer guy, the venom from the lips will run dry, and the kisses will once again taste honey sweet to the right person. |