Comments : Aphrodite

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    She arisen out of whirlpools of the greenish blue ocean,
    beginnings may have strange starts with beauty,
    she began to wonder if anger can have a home,
    or how about love finding a home within betrayal?

    I think this stanza is the hub of the poem. You're getting better with each magical poem you write. This maybe your forte, the mystical