I think that your words are well chosen because I can actually imagine this woman laying on the flow, the room seems almost empty, it's only her, the door and the clock that are actually noticeable. She loves this man, who doesn't realize her feelings because he's too busy with satisfying himself by always meeting different women that are of no meaning at all to him, while they hurt her even more. I like the fact that you first described her and then how she felt because of the current situation and then you came back to her. This is a very well written poem with captivating emotions.