Hey Kris I really like this one, but I already told you that

who look at this
we have additions

and I like it all that more now
it is a nice ending to this piece

I love it, it reminds me of something that happened to me when I was a child:)
Great work a 5/5 from me

Snips and snails
Boiling in pails
Ghostly howls and deadly wails
Cast the sound of the witches spells

Trouble doubled
Boiled and bubbled
Jar of voices left it snuggled
Snatched the youth leaving it tunneled

-these are my favorite stanzas

Snips and snails
Boiling in pails
Ghostly howls and deadly wails
Cast the sound of the witches spells
-though I like this one best
A fantastic poem very greatly written awesome rhyme and flow I loved it terrific job 5/5

Damn dreary..You nailed this one! Doesn't get much darker than this one. I enjoyed :
especially the jar of voices, how interesting. Keep writin and take care
Lostlove

Ohhh... that's so spooky. It's like grandpa is telling us the scary story, with lights off and a flashlight placed underneath the tip of his chin. That gave me shivers, especially with the alliteration. Super poem, I like how it flows, the exact musicality in horror movies!

That was a cool read. I got a kick out of the wording.

Nicely done bro. Chilling with perfect rhyme and flow

That was awsome love the way you use your words.

Hey, this one is very good. It kept drawing me in, its a nice way of telling a spooky story with rhymes and great words.

Hey, that was AWESOME !

WOW Kris !!

This is different than what usually write, but hey I like it !!

The way it flows and rhymes in imaginary. It really does sound like an old tale, it captures your attention once you start reading the first line.

Creative piece.