I think that this poem is really heart-wrenching, the emotions shine through very clearly. Your words paint a very vivid scenery and I think that your poem flowed very well. The fact that I can somehow relate to this made this poem so much more touching and captivating.

I'm not even sure how to comment. This cut to the core of sadness. Much deeper than the actual words penned. Excellent

This is a strong poem.

telling him hes not yours, that he never will be. As soon as he sees the words on your wrist you pull back so he can't see it anymore.

When you wake up you want him to be there but he isn't. & When he sees you, the look is nasty not love

Great poem :)
5/5