This is sad MAth, no you are supposed to write yellow stuff! = happy ones.

I love this tho, I love its flow, its wording, i love your rhyme scheme, and I doubtlessly love the emotions felt by the end of the lines.

I love the verses and enjoyed reading it twice!
well done..

5

Yes, yes, yes AMAZING!!

I loved it as well Mattie, I loved the deep emotion it gives you when you read it. Excellant choice of words, and great flow.

Keep it uo, 5/5

Wow so much emotion and greatness it's fantsic and wonderfully done amazingly written,,I can't seem to find the words of exactly how much this poem means , feels and how it's touched me but I've felt this before I know the exact feeling you have written greatly in this idk heartfelt poem,,it's just so great and very well done 5/5