by Poet on the Piano Dec 11, 2011
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Love, romance /
desired love
This is my dream song- |
by HOLLY ARMER
Wow...this is one of those poems that just leaves me dumbfounded and at a complete loss for words. |
A poem that flowed easy , tender wording and romantic overtones. Beautifully done, creative. A very enjoyable read |
by Britt
That last stanza gave me chills... such a stanza I can relate to right now :) I thought this was beautiful, with a perfect title. I love the imagery how you took us through different, yet very specific places, perhaps that truly mean a lot to you. Very vivid! |
by Decayed
That was so tender, so flowing, so nostalgic and sto melodious. The incorporation of fantasy in different places Venice, St. Peter's, Church..... is magnificent. It kind of boosts the spirit of the poem, and also it adds the flavor of aliveness to it. It hits home for me. I think it made me feel at ease with its dreamy tone, and the small descriptions of movement before declaration of husband and wife. Way to go MaryAnne, I can see you took off your dark veil which you ace :) |