That was so tender, so flowing, so nostalgic and sto melodious. The incorporation of fantasy in different places Venice, St. Peter's, Church..... is magnificent. It kind of boosts the spirit of the poem, and also it adds the flavor of aliveness to it. It hits home for me. I think it made me feel at ease with its dreamy tone, and the small descriptions of movement before declaration of husband and wife. Way to go MaryAnne, I can see you took off your dark veil which you ace :)
Nonetheless, you penned this romantic, free-wheeling piece with a unique touch. A-M-A-Z-I-N-G

That last stanza gave me chills... such a stanza I can relate to right now :) I thought this was beautiful, with a perfect title. I love the imagery how you took us through different, yet very specific places, perhaps that truly mean a lot to you. Very vivid!

A poem that flowed easy , tender wording and romantic overtones. Beautifully done, creative. A very enjoyable read

Wow...this is one of those poems that just leaves me dumbfounded and at a complete loss for words.

Such an enchanting piece that flows so effortlessly and your choice of words...flawless from start to end.

I especially liked the part about fingers exploring the hold of one anothers arms.

There is a typo in the stanza about the golden clock. Revolve is misspelled.

Brilliantly written!!!!