Comments : Of Dreams and Nightmares [vent]

  • 12 years ago

    by White Orchid

    Wow. This certainly was a poem of deep expression. In this world you're right. It is so hard to be happy, and there is a reason for that. So many bad things happen and its usually because of the selfish actions of humans. However, the future that awaits us may indeed surprise you, there is a hope for mankind and a hope for ones that are suffering. But this poem did ring true in many places and its always good to vent out our emotions whether good or bad. Nice write.

  • 12 years ago

    by Sylvia

    At times the truth does hurt us but that is part of life. We have to look for more, not be content with the way things are.

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Wow this is true and amazing fantastic write I was delighted to read it very greatly done 5/5

    I'm sure many can relate

  • 12 years ago

    by Areeba

    Amazingly written....liked it a lot

  • 12 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    Happiness isn't given we have to find it within our self's to enjoy what is given and forget the rest
    A brilliant write , deep and true

    Connie

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Well all I can say is one of the blessing is being able to read poetry such as this.
    Excellent flow, deep thought provoking words , great emotional value as well
    good write