Comments : This Dusty Old Table

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    There you go!
    that old dusty table gave you a source of inspiration.
    And I'm sure you will have a lot more to come. I particularly enjoyed the structure of the poem and how your words ran smoothly and to me they didn't felt force.

  • 12 years ago

    by Andee

    So Raw And I Love How You Talked Yourself Into The Inspiration Of Just A Table... :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    Sometimes we just have to look deeper and harder at things to see their true beauty. I loved this piece from you Jess. Well done
    Lostlove

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Very good :)

    trying to find inspiration sitting at an old dusty table thinking nothing of it. But as soon as you look closer you see all the name of lovers.

    great Job girl :)

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Meme

    Nothing to say about this poem except for NOMINATION !!

    I so loved the story behind it, and it is soooo real.

    Loved it with all my heart girl :)

    Keep it up 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    Great Job J. That was one heck of a piece.