This reminds me of that one song..hmmm You cant always get what you want...
I liked the message here Dagmar. You need to capitalize those I's. Some people get pissy about too many I's in a poem so I really do try to eliminate as I can. Oh, and ALWAYS ALWAYS ALWAYS capitalize God :) Keep writing Dagmar!
Lostlove

Thanks for bringing it to my attention.
People write what they feel in this case it was me I was writing about. I do like your poems a lot of insight.

This is absolutely true turn everything to God let him handle every worries that we have in life...God Bless

Hi Dagmar
I like your poems, even this, I write even, due to you could take up fighting for your points in life, don't hand you self over to anyone yet

I loved diss...it was great

And thankxx for the comments on my poems darl(:

I give this a 5 lol(:

I like your poem because you said what I do believe: we get what we deserve. Well done.

Nice one

It is directly from ur heart, a good message simple yet powerful 5/5

Nicely written :)

Wow! it so beautiful..5/5

Great poem of you! 5/5

You know Dagmar Wilson, your poem strikes chords with me, as we all know Life is a struggle. So everyday--

1 John Chapter 4
Verse 13
"Hereby know we that we dwell in him, and he
in us, because he has given us of his Spirit".

Peace and Blessings

Good poem, though I believe you can't put everything in God's hands.

God does not control he just watches over you, find strength in that

5/5

Well the God said, ask for whatever you desire through my son and you shall recieve it...A very nice piece with a powerful meaning.
An enjoyable read.

Many a true word spoken here Dagmar!
Yes, let us leave it all to the hands of God!
Well penned!

Trusting on God, believing on God is a very nice thing. Anyone can put his/her problems in the hands of God, but I believe anyone should hard to get what he/she wants. God is there for the guidance. In life, every body doesn't get everything. Nice poem.

Now here, in your write I don't see any punctuation.

Still I can say it's a nice poem.

An interesting and enjoyable thought provoking piece x

Yes veru wise and right someone must tey to find what he needs. Nice poems I want you to carry on writing wherever you are