Wow, this is really good!
God Bless Everyone In The Military! :)
Great Job Sweetie.
5/5

Good piece. It most be really tough for those who are in the military and to their friends and family members to have to say good bye and not knowing if they will be back. This piece shows how it affected you. Good job. And like jessi said god bless everyone.

What a sad but beautiful story.

It's like a movie where you want to know that in the end they get together!!! I want to know the ending!!!

He sounds like such a gentleman. It sounds like it will be a while before he leaves so there still is a chance.

Long distance relationships have known to work. He may feel the same way as you!!!

I hope it works out x

This poem was beautiful

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Well expressed. It's touch to say goodbyes but then love is a strong feeling :)
loved the narration :)

I really enjoyed reading this This poem felt as though it came from the heart and soul and the author had the mind to enhance the feeling with rhythm and rhyme

This was a really thoughtful piece,
Joining the army is a huge thing, and the heartache and worry we feel for someone we know going into this is strong,
you really got this through here,
and I tell you,
I liked the rhymes and rhythm and the flow was pretty good too
xxxx

Oh wow.. all of your poems so far have given me a great amount of emotions. This poem was sad, but it was also so beautiful!