Comments : Portrayed Strength

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    No one sees
    a heart broken girl,
    all the hurt that she's felt.

    They can't see past
    her sweetness
    and the kind hearted
    person she is,
    innocence to great
    but she is delicate
    and fragile too.
    -Wrong there love. I can see through anything :)

    I love this poem. Saying you aren't who you come off to be. That you only want people to see you as this strong girl, when as soon as night time comes you slowly fall apart as tears pour out.

    This has sad emotion in it
    Love it hun
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by average thoughts

    I am not strong
    it's just what I put on,
    an act I'm so good at.

    I can pretend
    all I want
    but when night falls
    the tears fall as well

    For thee only person
    I can't fool...
    is myself..

    Wow,kristian..i mean hw cud u..such a hrt touching poem..
    Evry single prsn on dis planet can easily relate to dis one..

  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    Really well-written. I love the message of this piece and the title fits perfectly. 5/5

    -X