Comments : Watchng...the clock

  • 12 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    Awesome rhyme and flow Tainted melody. I do remember that about your poems! Good to see you out here writing again :)
    Lostlove

  • 12 years ago

    by White Orchid

    I loved this girl. I thought the idea of it was so creative but yet how u described it made it poetic. It was almost as if it were a story and very clever and well written also. Nice write! Great job. :-)

  • 12 years ago

    by Dr sarat sonowal

    Liked the flow from beginning till the end
    especially liked
    'It knows all of the generations,
    The childrens imaginative creations'
    wonderful........for a clock...u brought life to it..

  • 12 years ago

    by Blissful

    Watching*