by Britt
"cracking, |
by BlueJay
This piece is so very descriptive, the imagery is vivid and the word choice is immaculate, I love it. The flow is so smooth, the tone so clear, yet your voice so loud in the midst. Excellent piece |
This is magnificent in every way. I enjoyed the descriptive wording, it was creative and enjoyable. Emotions painted boldly , yet with tenderness. Excellent piece of work |
Touching......a story of a little baby with impaired vision, lungs and ? brain (harming herself). Exposure to "substances" and nicotine?....so very sad. Is it FAS? |
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