A hush is caught
at the unfurled vividness
of poppy-tainted hues,
vision stained
with arresting color.
such a vivid picture of natures beauty. You have described it with perfection.
Flow,
curve,
arch.
Agony--
or ecstasy?
Again you touched on the very core of this beauty. You would be good at Haikus
A breath of passion
heavy with the
afterthought of rain.
and this stanza was just breathtaking. I don't normally do this but your poem is filled with talent and a keen sense of nature.
Excellent if I could give you more than a 5 I would..